A scene I’m cutting out of “Cruise Doubledate With My Sister”

Here’s the scene:

Once in the cabin, Rebecca asked me with a saucy smile, “Shall I give you a show?”


I started singing the stripper song. Rebecca kicked off her shoes then turned her back to me and made a circle with her cute little ass. She turned back to face me, reached behind her to unsnap her bra, then reached through her shirt sleeve to grab it. She slowly pulled it out of her shirt and tossed it aside. I had my shorts and underwear off and stroked my cock as she stripped for me. She slowly pulled up her shirt, revealing her toned stomach. When the bottom of her shirt reached the bottom of her tits, she spun around. As she shook her ass, she slowly pulled her shirt above her shoulders and then over her head. In high school, she had played a lot of sports and had also water skied. Her back still had good muscle definition.

Rebecca dropped the shirt down so that it was covering her tits. She twisted to looked back at me so that I could see her shirt-covered tits, then spun around to face me. I kept singing the same few bars over and over again as I stroked in rhythm. She pulled the shirt back and forth in front of her tits and then gradually dropped it down so that I could see her tits. They were large in proportion to the rest of her body and were a fine size me to fondle and suck.

Rebecca spun around again and put her hands on the counter that a TV was setting on. She did some big circles with her ass in time to the song. Her body was thin with her chest, waist and hips were all about the same size. She reached backed and slowly slid her shorts down her legs, revealing bright blue cotton French-cut panties. After she had kicked her shorts aside, she looked over her shoulder at me. “Like what you see so far?”

“I love it.”

The strip tease wasn’t long enough or stimulating enough to make me cum. It was long enough and stimulating enough that stroking my cock was giving me a lot of pleasure.

She grabbed the counter again and did some more big circles with her ass. She reached back and slowly slid her panties down, revealing her firm, cute ass. I kept singing even though my voice was getting tired. She made the descent of her panties last twice as long as her shorts, then she kicked them aside as well. The only thing she was wearing now was a chain around her neck with a cross on it. All but her arms and legs were very white because she always wore one piece suits. She stood upright and twisted her upper body to look back at me. She looked straight and then twisted a little more, exposing more of her body to me. She made bigger and bigger twists until finally I could see all of her naked front.

She gave me a big smile, then bounded over and jumped into my arms. She was so light that I easily held her off the ground as we kissed.

“That was wonderful.” I wanted to tell her that I loved her but when I had told her a few weeks ago that I loved her, she had gotten very defensive and had told met that though she really liked me, she didn’t love me. “I wish we could do more.”

“They’re probably wondering what’s taking us so long as it is. We have the whole cruise.”

That’s the way it was with Rebecca – she would do what she was willing to do and no more. Asking for more just made her angry. We got out our swimsuits and started putting them on.

The scene happens shortly after Thomas and Rebecca board the cruise ship. In this part of the story, I’m trying to establish that Thomas loves Rebecca but Rebecca is having problems with the relationship. This scene does nothing to advance that, so I’m cutting it out.

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