Yesterday, I got the following PM from Literotica.com:
Just read Sister Has a Plan. Totally awesome story. I loved the nursing.
I replied back:
I’m glad you liked it. I’ve always liked stories with breastfeeding in them.
I’m working another brother-sister story. Would be you interested in reading it over and giving me feedback?
The person agreed and I sent him the current version of “Cruise Doubledate With My Sister”. This morning, I did what I hope is the penultimate pass on the first part of the story. I’ll wait for comments from the new beta-reader, finalize that part and send it off to my editor.