“The Chevrolets” update

I did a first draft, sent it out to beta-readers for feedback, did a huge re-write, and sent that out for feedback. Since the major re-write, I’m on version 5. In the latest version, I’m focusing on cutting out what I can. First pass took out almost 800 words (I took out more, but add some back in). I’ll do another pass and then start searching for my problem words.