Another brother-sister story idea

Before the story starts, the sister Alice has broken up with her live-in boyfriend and has moved home. Her brother Bob is dating Diane. Not sure on the details of Diane – probably from a rich family, wears expensive clothes and likes wine-and-cheese parties. Alice and Bob are mid-20’s not sure how old yet. Not sure who’s the oldest.

At the start of the story, Alice and her brother Bob are moving the youngest brother back home after he has finished his junior year in college. Alice and Bob’s parents have downsized to a two-bedroom place. The plan before the drive is for the youngest brother to stay with Bob for the summer. When they get back home, Bob says the youngest brother can’t live with him – he’s too whiny. So the youngest moves back in with his parents, sleeping on the couch. A week later, Alice goes over to Bob’s and asks Bob if she can move in with him as the youngest brother is driving her crazy with his constant whining about having to sleep on the couch. Bob agrees.

Before the break up, all of Alice’s friends were women in committed long-term relationships. They aren’t appealing to her now that she’s single, so she starts hanging out with a co-worker Cindy. Cindy dresses and talks like a slut. Cindy loves seducing straight-lace guys. After Cindy meets Bob, she tells Alice that she’s going to seduce him.

Cindy starts flirting with Bob, coming on strong. Bob laughs it off. At one point, there’s a power outage in Bob’s apartment. Cindy uses the fact that Bob’s computer is off to crack the Windows password and see what porn Bob watches. Alice tells Cindy she shouldn’t but she’s secretly thrilled to spy on Bob. Bob has been watching of late a lot of stepsister-and-friend videos. Cindy saves a bunch of the links.

Later, Alice goes over to Cindy’s apartment. Cindy gets her to watch some of Bob’s porn videos with her. Cindy eventually convinces Alice to mutually get each other off.

Cindy eventually seduces Bob. Bob breaks up with his girlfriend and starts dating Cindy. Cindy gets frustrated with dating Bob – the seduction was the thrill for her and maintaining a relationship is more work than she wants. Bob wants her to dress and talk less slutty.

Final scene is something like this. Cindy gets Bob and Alice to have sex. She finds it incredibly hot to get them to have sex. As they fuck, Cindy talks dirty all the time. Towards the end, her dirty talk makes it clear that she’s passing Bob over to Alice. “She’s going to sleep with you every night, isn’t she Bob? And you’re going to fuck her sweet little pussy every night, aren’t you Bob?”

Lots of details to work out yet – Diane is a piece of furniture right now. I’ve got some ideas for Bob and Cindy flirting, but I need a lot more. I need to flesh out Bob a lot more. He’s in a job he hates and he views Diane as an important part of networking for a better job. Not sure how that resolves.

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This weekend, I got an idea for another story

Background: Greg and Jill are cousins. Their parents are two sisters that married two best friends. Their families grew up down the street and around the corner from each other. Greg is the oldest of the cousins. Jill’s older sister is one school year behind Greg. The two families have three kids each, each two years after the prior. The six kids played constantly together growing up and were very close.

Jill shows up at the apartment of Greg. Greg is finishing his third year at college and Jill is about to graduate from high school. Jill has told her parents that she’s staying at a friends for the weekend. Jill tells Greg that she wants to really know what college life is like, not the sanitized version that gets told when her parents are around. Greg agrees to do that for her. Jill also wants to go to a college part and get plastered.

Greg takes Jill to the dorms and introduces her to his girlfriend from freshman year. Let’s call her Angie. Angie tells Jill what life in the dorms is like. Greg drifts in and out. Jill asks Angie and Greg why they broke up. It was over a cookie. Greg takes Jill out frisbee golfing with some friends. They tell Jill stories about going to classes as they play. Greg takes Jill over to an apartment where two couples live for dinner. The guys were Greg’s roommate and suitemate his sophomore year and Greg’s girlfriend at the time was the one who set them up with the girls they are living with. After dinner, Greg takes Jill to a house party. Angie arrives and takes Jill under her wing as they both proceed to get wasted. Greg checks in every now and then.

Eventually, Greg takes the stumble-drunk Jill and Angie out to his car and drives to the dorm. Angie talks about what a great time she had and how much she misses Greg. When they get up to the dorm room, Angie tries to convince Greg to come in and fuck her. When Greg mentions he has Jill, Angie says he can fuck her too while she watches. When Greg gets Angie’s dorm room door open, he declines. He basically shoves her in the room and closes the door after her.

Greg takes Jill back to his apartment. She tries to get him to fuck her and he says no. He has her fall asleep in his arms. In the middle of the night, she wakes up and starts throwing up. Greg comforts her and takes care of the mess. Jill realizes she’s in love with Greg.

When Jill wakes up again, she’s alone. When she staggers out of the bedroom, Greg is studying. He makes her breakfast and then tucks her back in bed. When she wakes up with the hangover gone, she has a talk with Greg. At some point, she tells Greg that he took advantage of her while she was drunk. Greg says he didn’t. Jill says she can prove it. She has Greg lie back down on his bed and she then snuggles into his arms. Jill tells Greg that she loves him. Greg tries to deflect her by saying they are cousins but Jill eventually gets Greg to admit that he loves her too. They have sex and agree to get an apartment together for the next school year.

The story would have lots of dialogue in it. Jill has always wondered what it would be like to spend time as an adult with Greg instead of as a family member. They have a great time together through the day.

I’d think it’d be a sweet love story. Sadly, I already have too many stories that I have plots for and not enough time to write them.

 

I’ve gotten two story ideas recently

One day, I came up with the idea that the wife of the male main character takes off one day at the beginning of the summer, leaving him with their three kids. She stays in contact by email, but doesn’t say where she’s gone or when she’s coming back. The husband asks his little sister who’s just graduated from college with an Art History degree to come stay with them to help out while she’s looking for a job. She does.

Originally, I thought the husband and his sister would fuck while the wife is gone. The wife comes back at the end of the summer and confesses that she had an affair with a woman while she was gone. She didn’t consider it cheating at the time because she was with a woman instead of a man, but she realizes that she was lying to herself and it was still cheating. She offers to have a threesome with the husband and the woman. The husband confesses to fucking his sister and suggests that the they have a threesome with her instead. They all live happily ever after.

After a while, I decided that that wouldn’t work. Even if the wife had an affair with a woman, it would be devastating to find out her husband had an affair when she came back. And an affair with a woman that was still hanging around. There would be no trust in the marriage and it would blow up sometime soon.

I played with a number of possible plot changes and came up with the sister tries to seduce the husband but he refuses. The sister can’t believe that the wife would run out on such a great life and she wants to take the wife’s place. The husband is sorely tempted but the wife returns before he gives in. He thinks he’s safe but his sister continues to sexually tease him. His wife seems okay with that. Then one day the wife tells him that she has decided to invite the sister to join their marriage and she wants to have a threesome.

Not sure if that will work. Hard to imagine the wife initiating the threesome without it coming across as cold-blooded. Something to ponder.

The other story idea is a Christmas story based upon someone else’s story – A Gift Named Holly. The writer asked for feedback for the story. I liked a lot of the concept, but didn’t like how a lot of it was executed. I came up with my own version. I asked the author if it’d be okay if I did my own version of the story and haven’t heard back.