I could re-publish my current story inventory as it hasn’t changed. I had started the second draft of “Owe You Big Time” when I got the idea for “My Lingerie-Loving Sister Moves In”, so I could go back and finish it. However, I think it is too similar to “My Lingerie-Loving” (Sister moves into brother’s apartment after his roommate moves out) to be published right after it.
I’m leaning towards a story I’ve tentatively titled, “My Sister The Cookie-Elf”. It’s a fits-and-starts romance set in Farragut/Knoxville, TN with some tie-ins with the country music industry in Nashville. Their dad is a mystery writer, promoting his writing is a family business and a lot of the middle part of the story is driven by his book tour. Anyone knowledgeable about those areas and who liked to help me, please send me a PM through Literotica. I’d love some help!
At 4.77 with 7 comments already. I’ve gotten one PM saying I used “breathes” instead of “breaths”.
All the changes from the editor have been incorporated. I want to hear back from a couple of beta-readers and then I’ll submit it.
19.5K words. Feedback has all been very positive.
I’ve incorporated feedback from five beta-readers into “My Lingerie-Loving Sister Moves In”. I’ll start the final draft tomorrow. I’m very excited about this story. I think it’s the most visual of any story I’ve written.
Almost 18K words, so a little shorter then “My Cousin Shows Me Around Campus”, which was 5 LitE pages.
I think it’s a very good story, but I’ve hit the point that I’m exhausted dealing with it so it was good to send it out.
If you want to beta-read it, contact me.
Did a lot of buffing today. I went through all of my “bad words”. Haven’t written the final sex scene yet. I’m doing a full pass of the story and when I get to the final sex scene, I’ll write it. I’ll do another pass through the sex scene and then I’ll send the story out for beta-reading. The name of the story is “My Lingerie-Loving Sister Moves In”